{"id":714,"date":"2021-04-30T21:25:26","date_gmt":"2021-04-30T21:25:26","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/michelledevon.com\/?p=714"},"modified":"2021-04-30T21:25:26","modified_gmt":"2021-04-30T21:25:26","slug":"seeking-representation","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/michelledevon.com\/index.php\/2021\/04\/30\/seeking-representation\/","title":{"rendered":"Seeking Representation"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>So I&#8217;m seeking an agent for two of my books that I&#8217;ve put a lot of work into. I know one of them is ready but the other I&#8217;m hesitating on, wondering what I can do to make it better I always get like this in the editing phase of a book&#8211;what can be bettter, how can I make it even better than it is. It&#8217;s not goo enough. It&#8217;s probably a bit of an inferiority complex, especially with the one book because it is perfect&#8211;I really love this book. The other one, I started writing it twelve years ago, and it needs updated. Little things like she carries a pager and I was told by a beta reader that a pager was outdated technology. i don&#8217;t know iff that&#8217;s entirely true because I still see them used in the hospital and the lead character is a first responder with a pager for that reason.<\/p>\n<p>What do you think? Has the cellphone overtaken the pager to the point where a pager seems outdated? Should I change it?<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s not the only issue with this book though. I need to beef up the suspense some and work on pulling the reader through the chapters. It&#8217;s close, but it&#8217;s\u00a0 not there yet. I have an issue with a guy coming to pick up a kid at school too, and that wouldn&#8217;t work in real life because you can&#8217;t pick up kids without being on the list and having ID.<\/p>\n<p>They are minor changes I know i can make, it&#8217;s just that editing takes time and i don&#8217;t want to waste an agent&#8217;s time with a novel that&#8217;s not ready yet.<\/p>\n<p>The first book is ready though and I am both worried and excited to see what the responses are. I&#8217;m only searching on agent at a time so it will be slow during process of looking. Frustratingly slow sometimes&#8230;.but I know it will be worth it when the right agent sees my book and loves it as much as I do!<\/p>\n<p>What about you? Any of you looking for agents or am I the only &#8216;old fashioned&#8217; one who doesn&#8217;t want to self publish right now? I&#8217;ve seriously considered it but I want the ooomph from a publisher and agent behind me. I just do.<\/p>\n<p>How have you decided to publish? Small press? publisher? agent and publisher? Self published with your own ISBNs and doing the whole process yourself or self publishing through a place like createspace (kindle direct publishing)&#8230;..?I&#8217;m curious how you have decided to do it and why, while I&#8217;m thinkin of publishing myself. Any ideas or suggestions?<\/p>\n<p>Love and stuff,<\/p>\n<p>Michy<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So I&#8217;m seeking an agent for two of my books that I&#8217;ve put a lot of work into. 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